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Next point, never write a scene or a single panel that does not contribute directly to your plot. Every word should contribute to the emotion you're trying to engender in the reader. Okay, so this often means you have to kill your darlings, right? Even if you love a scene, love that turn of phrase, that great quote, you've got to ask yourself, does it advance the story or reveal a critical character trait? Yes, okay, it stays. No, it's gotta go.