Introduction to Romantic Comedies
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Oh, a spicy question.
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Because the writing is sort of everything, right?
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You can fix plot holes, but if the writer... So some readers love that and some readers are like, but I wanted more of this.
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So it's kind of, it's kind of a gamble.
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Hello and welcome back to the Right and Wrong podcast.
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On today's episode, I'm joined by a romantic comedy author.
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It's Penilla Hughes.
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Welcome to the show.
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And thank you for having me.
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Thanks for joining me.
Pernilla Hughes on Writing 'Kissing Books'
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Let's talk about rom-coms.
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You have three published novels, all rom-coms.
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Are rom-coms also your favourite thing to read?
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Yeah, I think they really are.
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I am a total romantic.
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and just want to see happiness and feel good things in everything.
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And also I just like laughter and comedy.
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Uh, I just think love and laughter go hand in hand.
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So that's what I write with my kissing books.
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I think because I think when I was a teen, I watched a lot of, um, Hollywood screwball comedies and so that, you know, the Doris Day and, and, um,
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Catherine Hepburn and those kind and where it was, they were just out and out love stories.
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And then there was humour in there as well.
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So yeah, that just wrapped me up for life, I think.
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So, so when it came to write, like writing rom-coms was just like a very natural thing for you to do?
Challenges of Writing Rom-Coms
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I don't think I can write straight.
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I've tried to write kind of worthy, straight stuff and it just always veers into comedy, at which point it's
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generally inappropriate.
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So I just, in the end, decided that actually this was my bag and just embraced it.
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Well, it's funny because I think things like rom-coms, and this is, I think, is this, you can see this especially in films where it's so rare to see a rom-com nominated for awards and things like that.
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But like, I think it also happens with books as well, where the story archetype itself is
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I think is often underestimated as something that might be easier or simpler to write because there is kind of a formula to it.
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And you sort of, most of the time you do know how it's going to end.
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And I, but I just don't think that's true at all.
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I think it's very difficult to, to, to write things like romantic comedies where you have to maintain the romance, maintain the comedy.
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What do you think about that?
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I think when people read a rom-com, they say, oh, that was an easy read.
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Well, I think the skill of the author is to have made it an easy read.
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And if they really look at it, then there would generally be, yes, there's a love story and a romance that contractually with the reader will be a happy ever after or a happy for now with hope as well.
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I was to write a book that didn't have one of those two with hope, then I would get slaughtered in my reviews because otherwise it's, I mean, you can have a love story that's sad, but then it's not a romance.
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And equally so, you know, when I get a review that says, oh, predictable, it's like, no, no, you picked up a romance, you were expecting a happy end.
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And that is the deal.
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What happens in between is the story.
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And that's where I don't believe you could have predicted necessarily all those things that
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I brought to the story and all my fellow romance writers.
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But I don't think it's any more predictable to anyone who picks up, say, a crime novel because the deal there is that the perpetrators are brought to book by the end.
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And if it was just left that they got away and, you know, ha-ha, then I think the reader would say, hang on a sec, justice was not served.
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This was not a satisfactory ending.
Romance as a Universal Subplot
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so I think the romance thing people do see as fluffy and, uh, but actually if you met the vast majority nowadays that get published have underlying themes, uh, stories, messages, just as other more, and I speechy marks worthy, uh, books, uh, have.
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And that is the skill of the writer as well, to be able to introduce those in a way that still, uh, are pacey and funny and, um,
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acknowledge the things that rom-com readers expect from the genre.
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I mean, when you look at almost every book, and the same with films as well, unless it's a children's thing, sort of middle grade and under, almost every story has, even as a B-plot or a C-plot, a romance kind of underlying or implication of romance within it.
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Yes, because we like that.
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I think that is the, I think it's like the way that people like spring, you know, the birds and the bees and those things, it's a new cycle of life.
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It's a hopeful time.
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And I think there's that element as well within those kind of films that we, even if there's just like in the C plot, there's something going on.
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It gives you the subconscious knowledge that life is going to carry on here.
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There'll be other things, new things are happening.
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Even if the story ends, there's new little relationships or sparks or things continue on in a hopeful way.
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And that's kind of the hope.
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that I was kind of would like to include in the, in the definition of romance being happy for now, just a happy after, because I mean, just the one that speaks to my hunger games, they do get together at the end.
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I think that's been in a few years on to not have, but yeah,
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That's an A to B via Z though, right?
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This is a love triangle.
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But the couple that at the end, she is so broken.
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She is so broken at the end.
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And I'm looking at that thinking, I don't see any hope there.
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You know, really it's not, it's a happy ending that's not particularly happy.
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Um, so I think from that stance, yes, just, even if there's just a hint of something, uh, between some characters, it does lead the reader to believe that there's story beyond the story.
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And also romance is so, it's almost universally relatable.
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You know, it's something that often grounds a character.
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So hunger games is a great example because it's like a Katniss, isn't just this machine that, you know, is kind of fighting the good fight and doing all that stuff.
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Sometimes you have these moments of romance where you as a human being are sort of like, oh, she also has feelings and emotions beyond overthrowing the world and things like that.
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She's like me in that way.
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I can relate to that.
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Yes, because you look at her and you think, oh, you are invincible and I would never be brave enough or strong enough.
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But actually there's still, at the end of the day, there's an element of, we all just want to be desired.
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I think the very ground level, everybody wants
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to be desired in some way, I think, which I think is something that I think is, is a true thing.
Keeping Rom-Coms Fresh
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So with all that in mind, then how do you keep kind of each story feeling new and fresh whilst maintaining the sort of the promise of the genre and the sort of staples that come with that?
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Um, I think because my three books are all
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They're different, but they're similar in the first two books.
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One's called Punch Drunk Love and one is called Probably the Best Kiss in the World.
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That's about, and actually 10 years as well.
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They're all women, young modern women who just are trying really hard and they're very capable, but they just haven't caught their brakes.
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So that's maybe my kind of angle on things.
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But also, you know, I try to bring fresh and modern because I'm maybe writing
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premises that aren't or you know kind of scenarios that aren't necessarily ones that I've seen before so my first book set in a boxing gym which Tiff She Inherits when I sent that was my debut and so I'd sent that out and I was getting responses like we like this this is fresh but would you be able to set it in a hotel because that was like more of a kind of
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Yes, exactly that.
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Uh, and the answer to that was no, sorry, no, it's definitely a retro boxing gym.
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And also the second book, well that beer making is a big theme in that.
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And, and it's like, that's not necessarily something I've seen elsewhere.
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Uh, so it's sometimes it's women in quirky jobs.
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And the quirk and the freshness there comes in that it's hopefully not something that's been done too much before.
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Like a, like a bakery or something.
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Not to say anything against those books.
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It's just not my place to, to, to write those.
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So, so for you, it's, it's a matter of like, okay, what's, let's see what there is.
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You know, you obviously read a lot in the genre and, you know, you're writing your own thing and you're like, okay, what's, what's the kind of completely new setting that no one's really messed around with?
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And, and, you know, sometimes it's not generally something that I, uh, have had so much experience of, but then I'll hopefully be able to go out and do some research on it and then make it seem, uh, realistic or plausible.
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At least I'm really quite keen to have something to be vaguely plausible, even if it is in, in,
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rom-com, which often people think is not plausible.
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So for 10 years, the list there is that they're completing a bucket list, these two characters, for a lost loved one, even though they hate each other.
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And there, the engine of it is this bucket list.
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So I was picking tasks they had to do that were not outrageously expensive, could be done from the UK, but then would still be able to bring humour to
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the story because it's in these false proximity moments that the bickering really happens and the conflict comes up.
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Yeah, staples of that trope, I would say.
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So it sounds like, so you, you know, you kind of try and find a new setting, you go and do a bit of research about that and things like that.
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Do you plan all of these stories out before you start writing them?
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I would love to be a planner.
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I highly value efficiency.
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And I think being a planner would make writing so much more efficient.
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But I think I have to accept that I am probably more of a pantser.
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And so I always kind of start at the beginning, right, do a plan this time, do a plan.
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And, and I sit staring at this plan and it just doesn't really come.
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So in the end I have to go, okay, you have to launch now because you can't waste too much time now.
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And then I kind of throw myself into it and then very quickly start flailing.
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And so maybe really I am kind of maybe a bit of a hybrid.
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So I have to start knowing roughly where it's going to go.
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And with 10 years, what I did was I,
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I wrote, because it was something that I kind of worked with my editor on, and I wrote the first chapter, the middle chapter, and the last chapter.
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So I then sent it to her and said, look, is this the tone you want?
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And do you think this will carry?
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And it did, thankfully.
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But it just meant that I already had the beginning, the middle, and the end to kind of, as those kind of tent posts to work towards.
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And I think that probably gave me the
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because much as I want to be a planner, I have a feeling that if I wrote a very, very staunch plan, I would then not want to write the story because I already knew what happened.
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And so really the surprise elements had gone.
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So I think I have to find some way of kind of finding it that there's a structure, but there's a looseness to it so that I can amuse myself, uh,
Character Development in Romance
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That's really interesting actually, as a way of doing it, because I've often the thing that I hear from, um, people who aren't, who don't plan is cause like you say, like there's a certain element of joy to writing it and discovering it as you go.
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So it's really interesting that you, especially as like a sort of pitch to your editor to be like, okay, so I've written the first chapter, the middle chapter, the end chapter.
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Obviously there was a through light, like you've basically said, okay, so we're going to start here, go here and go here.
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Like there is a beginning, middle, end, like you said.
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You have a very vague semblance of story, but between those points you're allowed to go and discover whatever crazy adventures you want.
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That's a really cool way of doing it.
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Well, it worked on this, on this last book.
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Also because of the nature of it, the structure of the story is, it's set over many years and they've been asked to do these tasks.
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I break up the book by year.
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And then within each year, there's kind of a catch up on what's happened to each character because they alternate with what's happened in the last year.
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And then the actual, the second chapter is then the task where they come together and we see what happens there.
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And so because I had to like kind of lay that out a bit because I also had to then look at
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because I was taking them from a point where they can barely tolerate each other to a point where they're in love.
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It really, I really had to look quite carefully at how far have we come, what's changed in them, and then what's changed in their relationship to each other.
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And so that did have to have some kind of plotting.
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So the, the, I'd say the action was free to come in my head as I wrote, but I did have more of a framework of,
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so-and-so needs to be open to this, but still close to that.
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And because that was just the nature of something, which is spanning 10 years, really, I think there's, um, cause I wanted it to feel plausible and that they could really have made this leap from there to there.
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It's one of those planning staples where, whereas to say like per chapter, you say, okay, here's three things that this chapter needs to accomplish.
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Oh, I wasn't that detailed.
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Wasn't that detailed.
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I'm making it more detailed in my head.
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But you, but you, you basically said, okay, this is the year we're on.
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This character needs to be at this point and this character needs to be at this point.
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I think, um, because really they're each changing at different paces and in different ways.
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And sometimes that would have to grate with each other.
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And sometimes I needed it to actually be in some kind of a synchronization to each other.
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So that we could at various times see hints of them being together and then it falling flat on its face or other times they're rubbing each other the wrong way, actually pushed the other one on.
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So there was those elements as well.
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You're hitting all the, all the tropes there.
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And the tropes is really interesting topic.
The Role of Tropes in Romance
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I think it's become such a sort of big part of the genre in part, thanks to the sort of explosion of book talk and TikTok, I think.
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And they've very much become part of the marketing.
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I believe they're marketing.
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Especially within romance as a genre.
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and I saw online that the 10 years was being promoted with the kind of like, I think you've got, uh, it's haters to lovers, slow burn, forced proximity.
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When you're writing, obviously, you know, we've kind of figured out how you, how you kind of map these things out, but going into it,
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Do you know which tropes you want to use?
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Have you picked out the tropes that you want to hit?
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No, I haven't come to it that I recall in ever thinking, oh, I'm going to write a, I don't know, a fake dating book.
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But no, I think, I think we, we knew 10 years that it was an enemies.
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Well, it was then, you know, an enemies to lovers, but I have been since corrected that it's a haters to lovers because they're not competing for anything.
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But I, so other than that, because yes, that was the, the hook of it that they, they, they, they dislike each other.
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everything else before that was up to grab was up for grabs.
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And originally it was like, we didn't quite, I didn't quite know how they were, they just had to come together every year.
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And it was very much, well, how do I make that happen without it being really boring?
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And so that's where the bucket list came in.
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And so that then became a Fox, a forced proximity.
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I mean, it was slow burn, I think because, well, it was always going to be a slow burn because it was going to span all these years.
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you know, the wham up front, I think certainly for a more, for a UK audience that the slower burn kind of feels more realistic.
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It's what we generally know more than, than Insta love, but that now three books in, and I'm looking at a fourth book, I'm trying to think, well, actually maybe do embrace the tropes, which ones are,
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do I really love and which ones do I want to immerse myself in and which ones maybe sit in juxtaposition to what I've written before.
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So I was listening to a podcast with Emily Henry on who wrote Happy Place, which I love.
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And she was saying that when she looks back, she sees that each book is kind of in reaction to the last book.
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And I definitely see something in that because my first book, there's a, someone gets dumped right at the beginning.
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Well, in my second book, someone's proposed to right at the beginning.
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And so it's almost like you're trying to be different from the book before.
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And by doing that, you pick opposing kind of tropes.
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And whereas tropes to me have always been a marketing tool, a shorthand for what you're getting.
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And I know that there's certain tropes that I,
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wouldn't naturally pick up and some that I've just have catnip to me.
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Um, then actually maybe that's, what's going to happen now, you know, with each new book that I think, well, okay, I've just done a haters to lovers.
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Maybe this next one would be something else that's, so I am kind of using the tropes now, I think to, to work out what I want to work on next, but I haven't done that up to now.
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I don't think I've automatically gone in and said, I'm going to do a secret billionaire.
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That's interesting.
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I guess you're just much more aware of them now.
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I think we're certainly within, if you're within romance, tropes are so key now they really are.
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And, but it, it, it really is kind of more, it's a classification just as if you went into the library and you'd go non-fiction or fiction and then within the, you know, the fiction, you'd go crime section or you'd go sci-fi section or you'd go romance section or
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And then within that, you then go to the next subsection.
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And it's just narrowing down niche by niche as to what your bag is really, and what shelf you should be looking at.
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And from a writer's point of view, it's like, which things do I really enjoy?
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And what will I put together to make hopefully a combination that is different?
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Yeah, that's so true.
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I'd not thought of it like that as a sort of smaller subcategory within romance.
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I don't think there's any other sort of bigger genre that has those kinds of granular breakdowns.
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I'm sure crime does, whether you want a police procedural or, and I'm not familiar enough with the crime.
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But it's usually two or three, right?
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And then you can go further and further and then people will realise what the kind of things they like.
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I mean, I know that there's people who generally like a crime book that has no romance in it at all.
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They don't want to see anything like that.
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And so that's almost its own little niche in its, or I don't know, is that a trope?
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I don't know, maybe it is.
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You know, so people, you find what is your...
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what floats your boat and then you will naturally kind of seek out others do that you know a cozy crime that's a whole new one it's not new they've been around for a long time but uh it's suddenly having a real heyday and um so yeah cozy crime is its own trope too i think cozy is spreading into all the genres now because i'm a big fantasy reader and cozy fantasy has just hit the scene has it
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There's a book called Legends and Lattes, which absolutely blew up.
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I read it recently.
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I've got that on my Kindle to read, actually.
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Maybe I've got the second one to read, I think.
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So I'm looking forward to that.
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It's fun to see something like that, where it's like, I kind of,
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got to know the idea of what cozy meant within a book through like cozy crime and things like Thursday murder club and stuff.
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Um, and then, and then seeing it transfer over to like fantasy and think, oh, this is, it's like, yeah, it's the, the genre is fantasy, but the feel, the vibe is very much cozy.
Mixing Genres for New Storytelling
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it's really interesting to see.
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That's really exciting, isn't it?
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I think that's so I'm a fan of a writer called Lindsay Davis, who writes historical crime set in Roman times.
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And they've always been funny and they've been going for decades.
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And they they've been funny.
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So I think that would have been you class that now as cozy historical crime.
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I mean, that's that's really getting quite niche then, isn't it?
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Well, and then there's also, um, like cozy horror is a big thing in YA now you get like, they call it spooky, but it's like, it's cozy spooky where it's like ghost hunting and vampires, but it's all kind of like cute.
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I've just read that.
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Um, I've just read one of those.
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And are you aware of Mark Stey's, uh, Witches of Woodville series?
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Oh, they are lovely.
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They are charming.
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They're set in the Second World War down in Kent, but they're really creepy as well.
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And so it's historical, I guess you could class it almost as historical, cosy historical horror.
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Lovely books and, you know, proper, really, really charming.
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But then, yes, these just that kind of really...
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horrible bits too.
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And really creepiness as well.
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So no, I really enjoy this kind of bringing together things from other genres or mixing it up, really like making that, that mashup to bring something new.
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I think that's fantastic.
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It's very exciting.
Pernilla's Publishing Journey
00:22:36
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I'd love to talk a bit about your experiences within publishing itself.
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All three of your novels are published with one more chapter, which is a HarperCollins imprint.
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The first one, Punch Drunk Love, published 2018.
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But I noticed, and I was curious about this, it was published before that under a different title.
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What was the situation with that?
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So the book was written under the title of Sweatpants at Tiffany's.
00:23:06
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That's a great name.
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And it was actually one of those books where when people say, how did you think of your books?
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Well, it literally was a pun on a film.
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I was sitting thinking, I had just come runner up in a short story anthology.
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And I thought, well, now, okay, I've had the validation that I can write.
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Let's write something big.
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And then I thought, well, what's that going to be?
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And then on the telly, Breakfast at Tiffany's came up and I loved that film.
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And I thought, well, what would a pun on that be?
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Because there are lots of women's fiction books, which are puns on some titles or film titles.
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Anyway, I came up with Sweatpants at Tiffany's and thought, well, what would that story be about?
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And I think it'd be someone who is not a sporty, I, me,
00:23:53
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Um, and she's put into a fish out of water situation.
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There's a trope there.
00:23:59
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Um, and you know, she, let's say she, in her
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the inheritance of boxing gym, what does she do?
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And then it was really one of those and what happens now and what happens now.
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And I was just making notes.
00:24:07
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And so the book was sold, uh, as sweatpants at Tiffany's and was indeed published by one more chapter as sweatpants at Tiffany's, but we just didn't think that, well, okay.
00:24:18
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The sales weren't good enough to make us think that actually it was serving the story.
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Maybe enough, not enough people got the, the reference.
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Um, so it had a bit of a makeover, change the title, change the cover.
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and you know is is better off for it so sometimes you know I I love the title it really tickled me and I got so much good feedback on the title but you know if it doesn't sell then it's not doing its job and so sometimes you have to not
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be precious about those things and just let the marketers do their thing.
00:24:51
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Yeah, that's, that's really interesting.
00:24:53
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And also really good that one more chapter said, look, this isn't selling, but we think, you know, mixing up the branding and the cover of the title could actually get this going well.
00:25:05
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And, and so from my point of view, well, I had nothing to gain by going, Oh no, you've got to keep it.
00:25:11
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Um, so no, I, I, I, and you're right.
00:25:14
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I was, I was heartened by the fact that they were wanting to make this change and give it another push.
00:25:20
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So that was, that was a good thing.
00:25:24
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Well, you see it time and again, even with like, um, how many different covers has something like Harry Potter had now?
00:25:29
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They have different editions come out all the time, don't they?
00:25:31
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I feel like every cover gets worse with Harry Potter as well.
00:25:34
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Every time I see the new covers, I'm like, you've made it worse again.
00:25:37
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Oh no, but it makes it, well, allegedly it refreshes the brand.
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And so I do see the value in that.
00:25:45
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And so that's what happened there.
00:25:46
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But I generally, what my worry is that people would buy the book thinking it was a new book and then get it home and then open it and see that it's still Sweatpants at Tiffany's and they've already bought it.
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And I always therefore put Punch Drunk Love brackets, formerly known as Sweatpants at Tiffany's, just because I don't want people to buy it and already have it.
00:26:06
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Well, if they've got sweatpants at Tiffany's, that's probably a collector's item now.
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So I wish, uh, but yeah, I do.
00:26:15
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I've held onto a copy.
00:26:17
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Well, it's going to be like J.R.
00:26:19
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Hartley on his phone advert, isn't he?
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Or is that a really old reference?
00:26:22
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You know, um, probably is.
Balancing Light and Shade in Writing
00:26:29
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Well, we've talked about, so we talked a lot about rom-coms, about romance and discussed how, how difficult and tricky it is to write and to keep it fresh and to kind of like innovate within the genre.
00:26:38
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What advice would you give to, to romance writers out there, rom-com writers out there to, to write, you know, write their stories whilst keeping the romance true and also keeping the comedy funny?
00:26:53
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I think it's a balance of light and shade.
00:26:55
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I think you need to have both because one elevates the other.
00:27:02
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I would, with my, with 10 years, it was very much because of it.
00:27:05
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The book deals with grief.
00:27:06
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There's, there's that theme running through of the different ways people handle grief.
00:27:11
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And so some scenes were about the grief, but then I would look at them and I was thinking, where is the funny in this?
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And equally, some of them were just like kind of the, the madness of the tasks.
00:27:20
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And then I was thinking, well, okay, where is the depth in this chapter?
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So it was really doing a pass to kind of check that there was a balance in all of it.
00:27:31
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Equally, I wanted my characters to come across as really real.
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They're actually very flawed characters.
00:27:40
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And Becca, for example, the lead, she's very spiky.
00:27:43
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And I know that's made a bit of a mummite character for some, but that was deliberate because
00:27:49
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I wanted them to be flawed and relatable.
00:27:52
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And what I would definitely and do advise writers to do there is to lock yourself in a room with a pad of paper, a pen and a glass of wine.
00:28:02
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And then write down all of your own personal flaws to be merciless in this task.
00:28:10
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And if you don't come out with a list, then you're not trying hard enough.
00:28:13
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Um, and then once that is done, drink the glass of wine because you will need it.
00:28:17
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And then, um, you will have in front of you a list of flaws that you can write about with knowledge and, uh, detail and maybe some, uh, reasoning why it is as it is because you understand it.
00:28:33
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And I think that's what I take from the, the adage of, you know, write what you know, um,
00:28:39
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It's because you know those flaws because they are yours.
00:28:42
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And therefore that when it goes down on the page, if you dig deep enough, readers will recognize maybe a bit in themselves and also maybe in other people and your characters will be rounder and real for it.
00:28:57
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That's a great little tip.
00:28:58
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I've not, I've not, I've not heard of that little strategy before, but that's, yeah.
00:29:02
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I mean, that's one of the, the best things that for people to do is because I think whenever you write, there's a, you know, all the characters are created from you.
00:29:11
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So they all do have, a lot of the time people do give them their own flaws, but to, to write them all out, that's a great, that's a great plan.
00:29:17
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And then divide them equally between the characters.
00:29:19
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Well, yes, hopefully.
00:29:20
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I mean, I, I, all my characters are me in some way.
00:29:24
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And I think I've, I've kind of discovered that I'm just trying to get around doing therapy because actually if I can just do, you know, something that's wrong with me in each book or just investigate it, then I'll save some money.
00:29:35
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Then you can just do one therapy session, but like in advance, you send them all your books and be like, so this is me.
00:29:42
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You can prep for our session.
00:29:43
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I've highlighted some passages for you.
Favorite Historical Romance
00:29:51
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Well, that brings us to the end of the episode and the final question, which as always is, Pernilla, if you were stranded on a desert island with a single book, which book would you want it to be?
00:30:05
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So this is a book by the author I mentioned earlier, Lindsay Davis, who wrote the Falco series set in ancient Rome.
00:30:13
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But she wrote this side book called The Course of Honour.
00:30:16
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And it's a romance.
00:30:17
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It's a second chance romance, which I'm an absolute sucker for.
00:30:22
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And it spans decades.
00:30:26
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The more time between the second chance and the first is, oh, I love, I just love it.
00:30:32
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And this book is one that I will reread.
00:30:36
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I don't reread that many books, but this one I can keep returning to again and again.
00:30:40
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And it's about the emperor of Spatian and his freed woman, Canis, who
00:30:47
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I wish I pronounced those right, but that's how it is in my head.
00:30:50
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And that is actually true.
00:30:54
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But then she has taken it and then just run with it and made this epic romance, which I just love.
00:30:59
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And generally, it's not really, I don't think it's particularly well known, or maybe that's in my head.
00:31:04
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But I was sitting at a retreat, a writer's retreat a year ago now.
00:31:10
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And I was sitting next to someone and they said, you know, what's your, what's your favorite book?
00:31:13
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I said, this one is my favorite book.
00:31:15
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And it was another person who had read the book.
00:31:18
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And so we, we prattled for a good half an hour just because we didn't think anyone else knew this book.
00:31:23
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And then I was at a book festival in March, May, and a lovely whitehead lady came up and spoke to me and we were talking about, and she loved
00:31:36
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And it was just, oh, the joy of finding someone else who loves a particular, but not very well known book that you love.
00:31:43
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Um, oh, there's a special joy to that.
00:31:46
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So yeah, Lindsay Davis, The Course of Honour, if you like a romance set in historical times.
00:31:52
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Or if you think you like it, you know, some people, you'd never tried that.
00:31:55
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They're like, oh, I've only read contemporary romance.
00:31:57
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Why don't I try something in ancient romance?
00:31:58
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Try something new.
00:32:03
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What a, what a cool answer.
00:32:04
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And it is one of the, the moment when you, you, you meet someone and you're talking to them and you realize you both like a book, it's like, oh great.
00:32:10
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Let's talk about the book.
00:32:13
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Cause usually you're like, oh, I wish there was someone else I could talk to about this book.
00:32:17
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It's especially if it is like an older book.
00:32:19
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And then I'm trying to think when this was written in 1997.
00:32:21
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So we're right back
Podcast Wrap-Up and Contacts
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into last century.
00:32:29
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So yeah, the older it is, the more chance that someone won't have read it.
00:32:31
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Well, unless it's a classic.
00:32:34
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And sometimes it just pushed my buttons.
00:32:39
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Well, a great answer, a great addition to the library.
00:32:42
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And thank you so much, Penilla, for coming on the podcast and telling us all about your writing and rom-coms and your kind of experiences with them publishing.
00:32:51
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It's been really cool chatting with you.
00:32:52
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Oh, it's been such a treat.
00:32:53
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Thank you so much for having me.
00:32:55
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And for anyone listening, if you want to keep up with what Penilla is doing, you can follow her on Twitter and Instagram at Penilla Hughes or head over to her website, PenillaHughes.com.
00:33:05
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00:33:09
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00:33:14
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Thanks again to Penilla and thanks to everyone listening.
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We'll catch you in the next episode.